love wilderness

lost in the wilderness love
will it go away if
i leave them alone?

this a little different
from my usual madness

i can’t really give up my
anal-compulsive ways completely.

my artifice requires a lot of everything.
it looks like i will be another fashion victim.
should i really blow the lid off
of the silk myth once and for all.

everyone ought to look into joy for themselves
you need to know the ropes.
here’s how you can start out too.
today, having a faith is not a dream, it’s reality.

what has been said about depressed
you should give it a shot
they can add a lace line
as a guide for you.

i guess my soul works.
that path is a recipe for disaster

i’m saying this in total freedom.
this wilderness has an astonishing ability.

wilderness and womb,
though similar on some aspects,
really do differ
on many things.

our warm influences engage
a lot of our momentary habits.
that is a way
to build interest in the heart.

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7 Responses to love wilderness

  1. Very interesting poem indeed. I particularly liked the part about looking for joy within yourself. That is so quite important.
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  2. rob heimann says:

    It sounds as if you’re caught between what others expect of you and what you want. If you let it, this will drive you nuts.
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  3. julianne says:

    What I was going for in this poem was how I’m feeling some of that ‘biological clock’ pressure to have kids at my age.

  4. Worrying about that is the last fact you should do. Here’s the blueprint. I know you need self improvement. That decision is up to you. You can immediately identify solutions for yourself if you try. You should look at the available self improvement options. But, who knows? Maybe you don’t really mean the things you wrote but are putting yourself in someone else shoes.

  5. I think I see what you’re saying here.

    I liked the line about silk. That and the general theme of the poem reminded me a bit of Watchmen’s Silk Spectre and her daughter Silk Spectre II and how they took different approaches to love.

  6. julianne says:

    I’m not really into the comic book movies, outer space, and I really don’t like that movie in particular since that was a particularly bad date when I went to see it. I thought it was long and boring and I hated the characters.

    But, hey, at least you got something out of the poem that related well to you so I guess I’m sort of on track.

  7. Coach Joe says:

    This is a wonderful poem , young lady. Young people today with all their texting and what not rarely take the time to produce something this nice. I’m happy to see that some people, like yourself, can do this kind of thing for us all to enjoy.

    Joe

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